Coffee Break Read – Truant

The feeling of grass between her bare toes encouraged the young girl to run across the sunlit meadow, laughing for the sheer joy of being alive.

The black-clad child hunter watched her from beneath his woollen cowl and smiled thinly. The girl would be an easy capture, he thought, and would suffer greatly for her truancy and the pleasure she was feeling now. The equally dark-clothed woman at his side exuded menace and gloating pleasure in about equal parts. He placed an admonitory hand on her muscular arm.
“Wait,” he ordered in sibilant tones. “Waiting will make your pleasure even greater. And will increase tenfold the shock and shame she will feel.”

Although vibrating with anticipation, the woman did as she was bid, contending herself by watching the girl with hot, hungry eyes.

All unaware of what was happening behind her, the young girl sunk to her knees in the flower-strewn grass and raised her face to the cerulean blueness of the afternoon sky.
“Thank you, lord,” she said softly. “Thank you for joy, and beauty, and for each day.”
She thought she felt a breath on her cheek and a hand at her forehead.

“Enough now,” the man whispered. “You may go and fetch the child to face her punishment.”
The ugly-minded raw-boned woman strode across the grass towards the kneeling figure, with a rope halter in one hand, and her lips pulled back from her yellowed teeth in a travesty of a grin.

She reached the kneeling girl and stretched out a bony hand to grasp her prey. But she found herself holding only a sleeve of rough homespun cloth.

Her scream could be heard for a very long way and it brought the cowled figure running.
“Gone,” she bewailed, “my pretty is gone.”

For a moment, the air shimmered with the laughter of an unseen entity that seemed to have nothing but contempt for the ugliness in the souls of the black-clad man and woman.

Under their feet the white flowers opened to the sun and a butterfly took flight.

© jane jago

Jane Jago’s Daily Drabble – Twelve

She tarted up carefully, sure she was good enough from behind for this to serve. 

Her husband looked at her.

“You sure about this, hun?”

“No. But. Belle was only fourteen…”

He holstered his gun and nodded.

At the street corner she looked back just once. 

In the park, a sharply-dressed man came up behind her. He grasped her arm, his foul breath in her face.

“Move along bitch. Only my stable works hereabouts.”

She whistled shrilly and the crack of a single gunshot ripped the air. 

As the pimp died she spoke.

“You won’t whore no more children.”

©️jj 2010

Haruspex Trilogy – New Covers by Ian Bristow

Ian Bristow talented artist, musician and author tells the Working Title Blog how he created the covers for Fortune's Fools second trilogy Trust A Few, Edge of Doom and A Walking Shadow.
WTB: These are a very different style from the covers you did for Transgressor. How did you keep the series feel going?

IB: There are a few ways to tie covers together, the most potent being the titling. If the same font and a relatively close color are used, the mind will automatically make the connection. But there is another, less commonly used, method that is very effective, and that is using a logo. Since there are three trilogies within the Fortune’s Fools series, it made sense to create a logo to really help push the connectivity. I think it really helps. Also, logos are just good for branding. It was a win-win.

WTB: Each cover has a face, but how did you blend in the different backgrounds as well as maintain the foreground elements, such as the code and lines?

IB: It was a matter of utilizing the ability to separate pieces of the image into their own layers. Once I had created the foreground, I was able to place it in slightly differing areas for interest while maintaining the overall unification of the images. With the backgrounds, I took from a core element and built off it, bringing in pieces of covers from the first and last trilogies to tie these ones backwards and forward in the series. I wanted them to feel like they are in the middle.

WTB: What did you find the most challenging element of creating these covers?

IB: There were numerous challenges, but the hardest part was creating the code and grid lines to match a small pre-existing area that had been on the original photo. It was essential that I got it exactly right or where it ended and I started would have been very obvious, essentially ruining the covers.

These new covers are available from today and to celebrate you can dive into the trilogy with Trust A Few for only £/$0.99 for the next 10 days!

If you would like to find out more about Ian Bristow's cover designing services, go to Bristow Design or look for Ian on his Website, check out his awesome timelapse art videos with his own original music on YouTube or follow him on Twitter.

Jane Jago’s Daily Drabble – Eleven

Dorrie walked into town with a bullwhip in her hand and a Navy Colt on her hip.

She moved purposefully to where a man sat on the sidewalk outside the saloon, with his boots on the railings and his hat tipped over his nose.

“Hi Pa.”

The bullwhip ripped off his hat sending it spinning down the street. He scrabbled for his gun and Dorrie waited for it to leave leather before shooting him between the eyes.

She looked down at what had been the father who sold her to a fat slaver.

“You always was too slow, old man.”

©️jj 2018

Coffee Break Read – A Mistake

An extract from Trust A Few the first book of Haruspex, a Fortune's Fools Trilogy by E.M. Swift-Hook.

A few days after that, Jaz finally agreed to a meeting which he received an invite to attend soon after he started working for Sarnai. He was not sure it was wise or careful, but he was going to go anyway. He did not tell anyone about it and if it went wrong he did not expect anyone to take the consequences except himself. If it went well, he was hopeful it could clear the way for the happy family he was now bound to, to leave the ‘City one day. It was a risk. But he was the one in hazard. Before he left for the meeting he arranged a time-delayed secure link message to Avilon. At least they would not wait needlessly or wonder why he vanished if he did.
He hadn’t had the dubious pleasure of visiting the Coalition Security Force main offices in the ‘City very often before, but he remembered it was low-budget. The crystal-plex walls were half-panelled and the view through them was pure, hard-core, industrial. The room he was shown into might have been the front office for any small company – workspace and seating provided – and the air of infrequent use robbed it of any sense of individual purpose.
“I do apologise for keeping you waiting, Vor Baldrik.” The woman walked into the room and dismissed the two men who had been watching Jaz in case he stole the desk. “I am Var Tyran and I hope we can do business.”
Jaz was reminded of some kind of predatory animal, the way she moved and took a seat.
“I think it would be useful if we could,” he agreed.
She was already pulling up screens and Jaz noticed with interest she ran a link-slot on her wrist. “So – Jazatar Baldrik, ex-Coalition Marine Corps, ex-mercenary, ex-terrorist, ex-Special Legion. A lot of ex’s for one lifetime,” she said. Jaz had no idea what he was supposed to say to that so he just nodded. “Present employment, Security Consultant for Sarnai Altan. Which I assume is a cute way of saying you kill people for her?”
“I protect Var Altan’s interests,” he corrected, more certain than before this had been a mistake.
“Then I am talking to the right person.” She smiled just enough to allow her perfect teeth to show, resting on her lower lip.
“You asked to speak to me. I have no reason to refuse you,” Jaz said carefully. He was walking through a minefield.
The Tyran woman sat back in her chair and just looked at Jaz. He looked back, which was not at all too hard on the eyes. After a long silence she moved slightly, resting one arm on the desk between them and seemed to be reading some data, perhaps she had been waiting for someone to find it for her – or perhaps she was in another conversation.
“You are a man we have been hoping to talk to for some time. Hard to find, Vor Baldrik.”
“I’ve been busy,” Jaz said.
Her lips pursed as if in disapproval and her eyes, a shifting shade of blue, held his own.
“But here now.”
Jaz waited. They had approached him. He had come.
“You have something of a reputation,” Var Tyran observed, sounding as if she was reading from a script. Her neat teeth appeared again and she leant forward on the desk. Jaz got up and walked towards the door, only turning back when she called him: “Vor Baldrik?”
“I’m not here to be flirted with,” he said. “If that’s all you have on offer – then, sorry, but I have better things to do with my time.”
The door shimmered as if in soft focus. Jaz recognised the meaning of that and stepped away from it.
“Please sit down, Vor Baldrik, I regret I cannot allow you to leave just yet.”
Alright.
So it really had been a mistake.
Jaz went back and sat down.

Trust A Few – E.M. Swift-Hook

Jane Jago’s Daily Drabble – Ten

She was lovely as moonlight, milk pale and slender, and tied to the cruel tree with her unbound hair as her only modesty.

Her knight protector sat firm astride his coal-black steed.

And waited.

The dragon came out of the sunset, shining like a golden spear. He set his scaly feet upon the earth, then frowned a draconian frown.

“Sheathe your sword, young knight.”

“Come but one step closer and I will sheathe it in your breast.” 

The dragon laughed, it was a bitter sound.

“They have cheated us both,” he breathed, “that one is not my legal prey.”

©️jj 2018

Author feature: The Flash and the Thunder by W.C. Quick

The Flash and the Thunder by W.C. Quick - An Orb Fantasy Novella

This story blends historical fiction with a sprinkling of dark fantasy from the Worlds of the Orb universe.  This novella is one of W.C. Quick’s rare, linear examples of storytelling. It maintains a close relationship with the main character, Thomas, with the somewhat complicated action and events being limited to his eight-year-old interpretation. 

Vernon and Thomas waited outside the shop drinking soda pop and eating greasy Spanish peanuts from the penny dispenser. The tire was fixed. Ray called back to the house from the pay phone on the street past the gas pumps to tell his sister where they were. She was driving down to fetch them back. They were watching the cars rumble past on Main Street for the green sedan.

The tire shop was on the business end of town. There was a feed and grain store across the street and a welding shop next door with a large open lot covered with rusty metal. It reminded Thomas of the Prather’s yard. The vision disturbed him, so he looked farther down town.

He noticed three boys on bicycles darting through the alleys between the buildings farther down. Main Street was lined with red brick storefronts. The picture window glass reflected their movement along the sidewalk, weaving around parked cars and then disappearing into another alley.

Vernon saw them also. “That Roger riding around with the Prather boys?”

Thomas felt his stomach knot up again. “Yeah.”

“Uncle Ray says that Clifford is not too bad, slow from getting locked up in a hot car too many times, maybe.” Vernon turned to face Thomas. “Delmar is something else though. He is slick tongued and smart as the devil. He almost beat a boy to death in High School ‘cause of the way he looked at him. Now he goes to that continuation school since he got out of juvenile hall.”

Delmar was leading the group, waving for Clifford and Roger to keep up in a mad dash between moving cars. They raced around behind the hardware store at the beginning of the row of brick buildings. Delmar sped up, rounding the alley corner behind the building and then darting into the open driveway leading back to Main Street. He was looking up the street, shouting and waving the other boys forward.

Thomas got a good view his older brother, his face down, cheeks puffing for air, standing and pushing hard on the pedals to keep up. Roger could not see where he was riding.

Delmar slammed on his brake and caught Clifford across the chest, almost knocking him off the bicycle. Roger flew past the brothers into the street and the path of an oncoming car.

The front wheel of his bike crushed back into the frame before being sucked under the right wheel of the car. Roger went flying, arms and legs slapping against the sheet metal hood, windshield and roof of the black sedan. The car tires locked, blue smoke billowed out underneath, as sparks flew up from the snagged bicycle.

Thomas dropped his soda pop and started running up the street toward Roger.  

The author, in his own words:

So, I am old. I was a USAF military brat, traveling around to Air Force bases and installations around the States 1953-1963. I recall the diversity of the USA, no fast food to speak of, a noticeable difference in schools, teaching, people/culture… not better so much, simply different. There was more open space around neighbourhoods. I imprinted on nature, forest walks and the enjoyment of solitude. Forests and wild things are major characters in my stories.

I was a welder and metal worker for about forty years, owned and operated a welding business for the last seventeen years. I did attend two years of college early on – English Lit and Biology. Nobody made real money in either of those disciplines as a grad, I noticed. I decided on a trade. 

My Orb Fantasy characters usually have an interest or activity in metal work. Elves and the Fae, as a lot, have obsessions with metal, shiny stuff. And iron is a ward to magic.   

I have written stories since I was a kid. The transition to writer/vagabond was a seamless fit. I prefer the solitude of my small trailer in the desert or parked in the pines. 

A Bite of... W.C. Quick
Question one: would you rather be a hero or a villain? 

I struggle with this question. Villains are often the most interesting characters in fiction and life. So far, the closest I get to being dark is offering my villains the logic of power and fear based motivation. Being afraid is the most impotent of feelings, so the boosting to the action form of fear, anger to pure hatred gives that character power over gripping fear/impotence. And my evil Elves get stronger draining life from others.

Giving a character somewhere to grow… that catharsis to transformation thing could be a great way to write a story. Unfortunately most fantasy readers/movie goers do not like to adjust their view of a particularly nasty character. I have Darth Vader in mind.  

Question two: How much of you is in your hero and villain?

Thomas in The Flash and the Thunder is most like me, though he is much more observant and thoughtful than me at eight years old. 

Question three: Chocolate cake or coffee cake? And give reasons.

I bow to the purity of milk chocolate frosting on dark chocolate cake. It is the go to, all occasion cake, the reason to attend the event in the first place. 

Though I will eat any cake, coffee cake often has the issue of requiring coffee to choke it down.

You can find W.C. Quick on his own web page

 

 

Sunday Serial XLVIII

They cuddled for a few moments then Anna reached into the drawer in her bedside cabinet.
“I do have a thing for you. It’s not as special as my box, but I can’t make stuff like you.”
She handed him a small box wrapped in shiny silver paper with hearts on. He smiled into her eyes before opening it to find an elegant watch. He took it out of the box then stopped with his mouth agape.
“God Anna, it’s a bloody Rolex. You can’t go buying me Rolexes.”
“Could if I wanted to. But I didn’t buy it. It was my dad’s. He loved it more than any other possession he ever had. So I kept it. Now I want to share it with you.”
Sam put the watch back in its box and gathered Anna into his arms.
“Oh, love, that makes it so special.”
Her face glowed as she looked at him.
“You really do understand. Some guys wouldn’t be at all pleased to be given a secondhand watch.”
“Maybe, but that would be their loss. Some women wouldn’t be delighted by a wooden box. They might even throw it in a skip.”
“No. Sam. She didn’t!”
“She did. Carrie rescued it, so I told her to keep it.”
“Fucking bitch! Christina, I mean. I hope Tariq stripes her ass night and morning with a leather strap.”
Sam grinned.
“He probably will. And I find I couldn’t care less. I have all I want in the world right here.”
“Soft on me, aren’t you?”
Anna grinned wickedly.
“Will you please turn the watch over and look at the back.”
He did as she asked, to find tiny, neat engraving in an elegantly simple script. He read it out loud. ‘Sam from Anna on our wedding day. All the love in the world.‘
After a lot more kissing and a few tears of happiness, Sam looked at his wife-to-be.
“I reckon we’re soft on each other.”
“Could be.”
They hugged again, then Anna sat up.
“Breakfast?”
“Please.’
“You get your shower and I’ll go make bacon sandwiches.”
“I’m on it.”

By nine o’clock Sam, Anna, Bonnie, Danny and Paul were fed, and a rather battered Ford Focus drew up outside to disgorge Ben and Colin. Ben was as red-faced and hurried as ever if a bit unwilling to meet anyone’s eye, while Colin was at his campest and most waspish.
“What’s up with you two?” Anna demanded with her hands on her slender hips.
Ben mumbled something, and Colin looked fixedly at the sky.
“Come again?”
“I asked Colin to marry me, and he said no.”
Anna turned to look at Colin.
“And? What?”
“Oh. He only asked me because his oldest friend is getting married and he doesn’t want to be left out!”
Ben looked at his partner and huffed out a laugh.
“So that’s your problem is it?”
He got down on one knee in the gravel of the drive.
“Colin. I love you. Life without you would be pure misery. Please marry me so we can grow old and grumpy together.”
For a moment Colin’s reaction hung in the balance, then he grinned down at Ben.
“Are you sure?”
“Never been more sure of anything in my life.”
“Well OK then. Let’s get married.”
Ben leapt from the ground and grabbed Colin in a huge bear hug. Anna tugged her men indoors.
“Let’s give them a few minutes. I’m off to make myself beautiful.”
She climbed the stairs, leaving Paul and Sam to look at each other in amazement.
“How does she do that?” Sam exclaimed.
“Do what?” Danny laughed.
“Make people see sense so easily.”
Danny thought for a minute.
“I think it’s something in her eyes. It’s hard to hang on to a grievance when she looks at you with all that tolerant understanding. She had such a difficult childhood and adolescence, but instead of making her bitter and self pitying it just made her understand human frailty.”
“It did indeed. It’s among the five million reasons I love her so much.”

Then the door opened and Ben and Colin came in looking much happier. Colin was carrying a big white box and Ben held another.
“Where’s the bride?” Colin asked.
“Upstairs making herself beautiful.”
“Well this is for her. You’d better take it up Sam. She probably wouldn’t like me popping in if she’s not dressed.”

Sam took the box that was thrust at him and cantered upstairs to the master bedroom. Anna was half naked, and turned a questioning face to him.
“What love. I’m about to take a long shower.”
“Present from Colin and Ben.” He put the box on the bed and stood back.

Anna went over and opened it; her mouth formed a small o of delight. “Come see Sam.”
He looked into the box to see a bouquet of cream roses and orchids, plus a delicate wreath of the same flowers, obviously meant to go in the hair.
“I never thought of flowers,” he said a bit sadly.
“Me neither. I see Colin’s hand in this. Aren’t they lovely.”
“Indeed they are. But not as lovely as you.”
He grinned at her with an evil spark in the back of his eyes. “I think I’d better shoot off now, before I get any ideas.”
With that he was gone, and a laughing Anna began her preparations for her wedding.

Jane Jago

Jane Jago’s Daily Drabble – Nine

He waited, wondering if she would come. Anna, his wife, the torment of his days and the delight of his life. She had been visiting her terminally sick father. He could not resent the old man, but he feared the creature comforts of Anna’s old life and worried that his love might not be enough to make her return.

He looked at his work worn hands, and prayed for her return.

The train whooshed to a halt and the gate opened. Anna stood there quietly, almost as if unsure of her welcome. 

He opened his arms and she came home…

©️jj 2018

Catch The Wind

We tried to catch the wind today
My fickle friend and me
But as the zephyr flew this way
My friend deserted me
We tried to catch a friend today
The winter wind and I
But as my friend came out to play
The breeze did wave goodbye
Oh you may have the wind he sighed
Should that be as you choose
Or you may have me at your side
You win one, one you lose
We tried to catch the wind today
A wind to sail us home
But fickle fate gangs aft agley
And now I cry alone

© jane jago 2017

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